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Feed the Kitty...

cinnamonjames

Published: Sep 7, 2006

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I recently spent some time at Dom and Adam's house, and upon witnessing this scene, I thought "I'm going to draw that on the train ride home". So on the train ride home I drew it.

Yes, it's true that if you check the video surveillance footage, you'll see I took the liberty of switching their places on the couch - I just thought it's read better that way.

Drawn with a mechanical 2B pencil on an A6 sketchbook, scanned and coloured in The GIMP with the aid of my ever-trusty mouse =')
I've put the original lineart in my Scraps [link] just in case anyone wishes they could be the one who'd coloured this in...

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domkitty

Sep 8, 2006

Lol, thats so me. Did Ad shave for the purposes of this pic?

Its the truth, the world would be a much happier place if I was just kept well fed and loved :3

You should pay a visit again soon. It was awesome. I cant remember the last time I so enjoyed staying up all night

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